Queue (queue) wrote,

A really great story that could use some decent copyediting

Casey put his hands in the pockets of his gray dress slacks, and straightened his tie.

It's a talented man who can straigthen his tie with his hands in his pockets.

From Salting the Map, which is a neat story, although the end left me a bit . . . eh. And, like the subject line says, it could use some decent copyediting. I will wait and read Fortean Bureau for a few more months, and then I might send them an email offering proofreading and copyediting help.
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